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The World Inside

barren heart
immune to all morality
scarce remarks
just to connotate functionality

Inside the box
of my created reality
framed in by delusions
of differed stability

locked doors
inspired by sequester
closed arms
where isolation can fester
       

Author notes

"isolation" nuff sed.

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  • Leaving Today
    January 28, 2008

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    HMM..U forgot to put the option number......please do that. I guess.."Isolation"?? Well, the poem is good . Best of luck in the contest and thanks for entering.
    Regards,
    Sweet Silent Talker