Being with you this starry night,
The warm campfire, the wind so cool and calm
I hold tight, and a kiss for you, I just might
You hold my hand, and tickle my palm.
A shooting star across the sky,
Nothing could ever bring us apart,
You look at me with a twinkle in your eye,
Upon your chest I rest, I hear you heart.
You give me a kind little kiss,
This is something that I've only dreamed of,
You're someone that I begin to miss,
I wonder, could this really be true love?
I treasure knowing that your mine,
So a lifetime with you, would be just fine.
Author notes
Dedicated to my one and only: Raymond! I love you so much.
A contest entry
- Make me cry....options =] and PW allowed :D by LeilaJayne.
900 points, ended May 17, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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WOW THIS IS REALLY GOOD!! keep the good work up OAEXIA!!
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oh wow! this is a lovely poem
i see how much you love him and i like how you placed
a relaxing and sweet image to my head.
it was really awe-inspiring to read this piece ^^
i definitely love this simple write of yours =]
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