[ in my dream ]

in my dream

i was going down a stream

near lushes grass,

it was carm and quiet

peacefull indead

till i fort there was a snake

beside me

up near a verry closse

tree

then i skreemed

in and out of me dream

and woke up

my mum and all

A contest entry

By me, right now

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January 28, 2008
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January 28, 2008

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hmm...nice poem, but several spelling mistakes. calm, not carm. "peaceful", "indeed", "very", "close", "screamed", etc.

Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest

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Sweet Silent Talker