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I vow to you my darling

That you and I will share a lasting love,
  and I will love the sharing.

That we will share a mutual care,
  and I will love the caring.

That, together with our children,
  we will live a tranquil life,
  and I will love the living.

That you and I will give each other space,
    and I will love the giving.

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  • RunningFree
    February 4, 2008

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    I like the repetition in this one. It drives the point home that what you enjoy most is the action of loving another person. Thank you for the this short, sweet piece of poetry. I really enjoyed reading it.