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Frying pan

Frying pan sounds clang
Rustling sounds scatter through the house
A loud thud and bang
Feelings of fear and doubt
3:00 in the morning
Strong smell of stale gin
Mommy’s secret weapon 
Daddy’s torment will never end
Childhood memories of pans and pots
Daddy’s late night creeping has never stopped

Author notes

Child hood memories. kind of funny...........now

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  • raingoddess gold member
    January 27, 2008

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    Excellent

    Traveling down memory lane, may be funy now but most have caused quite a bit of pain in your younger years, excellent write my friend, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.

    raingoddess


    • Mykeee
      January 27, 2008

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      Not something i understood fully but later began to resent my step father for his BS. But humor comes in different forms ~ thank U precious


  • Ephiphany
    January 27, 2008

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    awww....

    you and I were going down memory lane yesterday, huh?
    Thank the Lord for his mercy, no tellin what I would have done, looking back on my past hurt and pain that I have no overcome.
    Great job once again, Michael.

    CC♥


    • Mykeee
      January 27, 2008
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      Thanks, sometimes we have to relive it to get past it. Always a pleasure