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Incoherent

I need what you haven’t told me to
Wait
I can’t seem to express my, ah ,
my head doesn’t
Wait
See this feeling when you, I mean what I’m
Sorry, wait a minute
My thoughts just seem so, well disturbed when
Hold on
Ah
Mean the words can’t
When
Ah
Mean, could you hold on and
Just
Wait a minute
Let me get my self so
Don’t walk away
Because
What I am trying to
say  is
I’m speechless
When I’m with you

Author notes

A real life situation. Funny as hell. She walked away (dressed in Lavender)

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  • MahoganyFlow
    January 29, 2008

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    AHHH! LOL!!!! I f***** luv this!!! That's all I can say! Oh you killed this one!


  • sunny day
    January 28, 2008

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    Bravo!!! Bravo!!! Bravo!!!

    She probably wanted to pull the words off of the Adorable Swish's tongue at that point. LOL She really had you feeling "So Caught Up" as Usher would say. I love that you used the purple in your background seeing as she was dressed in lavender. It added a nice touch to this one. This was awesome and I can picture it from your words. Thank you for sharing your gift with all of us once again. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


    • Mykeee
      January 29, 2008

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      Thanks Joyce - this was embaressing and funny all at the same time. More so because I am not the type to jump away from any conversation. But she was really overwhelming. Thanks for catching the background


  • raingoddess gold member
    January 27, 2008
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    LOL

    Man, sounds bad but you who have never had any problem alking to me, was tongue tied and you could not find the right words to say. I would have never thought it, if you had not wrote this. Thank you for sharing and keep them coming.

    raingoddess


    • Mykeee
      January 29, 2008
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      You are a totally different and I got use to you


  • TizMoi
    January 27, 2008

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    Awwww bless. Am sure your not the first to have ever been in a position like this. LOL. Well penned by yourself as usual.


    • Mykeee
      January 27, 2008
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      thank u. I thought it would bring out some memories


  • Ephiphany
    January 27, 2008
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    Ok...I like this.
    I've been there before.
    CC♥

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