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Shining Through

Look at the stars
So far away
Let's find our own
And shine through the day

I'd give up forever
Just for you
So come with me
And we'll shine through

Time to go
But you won't come
I see that now
You love the sun

So I leave alone
Just floating through space
And as I look back
All I see is your face

As I float
I look around
I'm all alone
Miles from ground

The other stars
Have gone away
I'm by myself
Night and day

Someone come
Take me with you
We'll float through space
And we'll shine through





Author notes

=) I guess I'm a bit rusty hey. Ohwell.

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  • fadedpace
    January 27, 2008
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    Serene

    There was something calming about this as I read it. I liked it.