Placing thought within reasonable proportions
Visionary patterns seal open minds
But yet you carry no form
No substance no aspects of beliefs
That seats your mind in the congregation of secularism
Apparitions reveal emptiness
Hollow relationships of cordiality
Plastered within cuticles of your mind,
you remove the dirt
The grim that you dug from passing acquaintances
Yet still
It reveals the seclusion of your thoughts
These thoughts of infinite omnipotence
Within the Ethiopian grinds of your chalice
But failure becomes you
So you continue to stare
Steadily at your transparent aspirations
That will never seem
To materialize
Author notes
The lack of normalcy not existing, questioning the reality of religion, science and relationships. Just outside of linear thinking.
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I don't know if this is abstract. Also, you did not explain why this is abstract in your opinion so unfortunately I must DQ you. But just to let you know, this is an amazing SURREAL poem in my opinion, the wording is exquisite and really make the reader thing of life. Wonderful write. Good luck with your writing, keep it up.
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This is a very deep question, that I am sure everyone as asked at oen time or another, what religion is correct? Excellent write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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thank U just something that came up.
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