Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Mama Mia!!!

Mia was only a year old
With few teeth of her own
She made frequent visits
To Grandma Patty’s home         

Mia was amazed one day
She couldn’t believe her eyes
Grandma Patty could remove her teeth
It was a wonderful surprise!

So Mia devised a plan
It was perfectly sound
She would get her hands on these teeth
When no one was around

One day Grandma Patty left her dentures
On the nightstand by her bed
But when she came back for them she found
They were in the hole in Mia’s head!

A contest entry

What do you think about this poem?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 10 of 10

  • mzmikki
    March 27, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Why Thank you!!!


  • Malkolis
    March 27, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Great Write, this is adorable. reminds me alot of my niece, and that is such a good thing.

    children are definitly the premier authority on innocense and you captured that beautifuly

    Good luck in the conest!


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    February 9, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I bet that was a cute sight to see!! She was wearing granny's smile for sure!

    great job in this!

    SilverButterfly
    (Mary)


  • Mykeee
    February 7, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    this was cute. I like the child view of being fascinated. Adults look down on things where children find joy. Nicely doen ~ Mykeee


  • Ephiphany
    February 7, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Awww,

    this was so cute, Mama Mia,
    Great job girl, and good luck in the contest.

    Ephiphany♥


  • Menace
    January 27, 2008
    Edit | Reply

    Cute

    This is a very funny little rhyme you have here. My daughter would love it!


  • raggyann
    January 27, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    lol children are the best
    they are amazed with flse teeth this was to cute
    i loved it
    smile


  • Sandygram silver member
    January 27, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    This was so cute. Being a mom and grandmom I know kids can do the silliest things. Thank you for the smiles this morning. A delightful poem. You take care, Sandy


  • micol
    January 27, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Yes, a delightful poem, and welcome to AP. You work well with poetic narrative, not a particularly easy way of expressing yourself. I look forward to seeing more of your work.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    January 26, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    "So Mia devised a plan
    It was perfectly sound
    She would get her hands on these teeth
    When no one was around"


    Very nice rhyme scheme my dear, an adorable story, and welcome to AP by the way!

1 - 10 of 10