Hey is that peanut
butter that I smell.
Yep thought it
was peanut butter.
But just to make sure
maybe I should lick it.
Yum peanut butter.
what no my tongue
is stuck in the jar.
Let me go i knew that i shouldn't
have eaten the entire jar.
I can get out
if I just LICK.
Author notes
Got my influence from the pic. When i saw the pic this came to mind.
A contest entry
- ~ SET the BAR ~ Anything Goes~ Possible of 5750 points handed out! by Florida Sunshine.
950 points, ended February 24, 2008, 184 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Spoilt Pets!!! Give me your best Paris Hilton pooch write hahaha by moaner.
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Comments
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hahaha this is sooooo true. my dog has a fetish for plant pots, and once he actualy got one stuck on his face. he looked like he had a gas mask on hahaha, funny poem good luck in my contest x
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I LOVE PEANUT BUTTER!!! totally random and i love it
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LOL ~ oh peanut butter ~ I am a bit of an addict too ~ lol ~ this is a funny write ~ the imagery is nicely done ~ I can almost picture it in my head ~
Thanks so much for entering the "Set the bar" contest ~ LOL more I think of it ~ ... I laugh ~ cause when I first clicked the poem page ~ I was already heading in one direction ~ LOL ~ No I won't say which direction that is ~ lol ~ too funny ~ I do appreciate you sharing your work with me ~ best of luck to you! -
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thanks
and thank you for all the hms that you gave me
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what pic?
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it was in a contest at least i thought but the system is f***** up again that makes 3 poems that i wrote that never went to where they were suposed to be it is a contest that was hosted by invisible angels so now it won't get heard by her
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oh well just go to the contest and tell her what happened- it should work out for you, and if not at least give me the contest link so i can check out the picture that inspired this lovely poem. [[oops i forgot im not supposed to be talking to you lol]]
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ya so
it was a pic iof a dog with its tongue in a jar all the way to the bottom of it in fact
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