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Trembling

Clustered, cloistered fears innervate me,

wings tucked between legs

afire, chrysalis bursting, prodding me

to fly - or I shall die.

A contest entry

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  • LadyLavender gold member
    January 27, 2008

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    Beautiful. Strong use of imagery. See this clearly in my mind's eye.

    Good luck and thank you for entering!

    Please donot respond to this critique. I wish to keep annoymous.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 27, 2008

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    this is such a beautiful write and take on the prompt really captures alot of strength in your words. best of luck