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You're The First One

You’re the first one that I’ve kissed and actually felt something inside me jump.
You’re the first one I’ve touched, the first one I’ve held, the first one I’ve loved.
You’re the first one I’ve met that knows me better than myself.
You’re the first one that can take me to places I never thought were possible.
You’re the first one to love me with such powerful passion.
You’re the first one I actually cared about and wanted so badly to be with every second. You’re the first one that made me cry myself to sleep.
You’re the first one that kissed me in my dreams.
You’re the first one that stole my heart forever.
You’re the first one that calmed my body and soul when I would feel like jumping.
You’re the first one to hold me and everything was perfect; I would cry when you touched me and pulled me in because I was so scared that I would never see you again.
You’re the first one and I know I couldn’t forget you.
You’re the first one and I can’t let go.
You’re the first one; please just hold me forever.
Please.


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  • scenario five
    February 9, 2008

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    I'm a wimp. and persistant.
    I cried when I read it.
    and...I told myself that I wasnt going to read it because the first too lines were to painful...
    I need to listen to myself more...:\

    but this was really great...reminds me of well...what I used to have.
    ...>> ....now I have to find a way to make me happy.

    =D but great write!

    -Jenn
    [wow, I seem bipolar today...]


    • Rain-Shot-Rose
      February 9, 2008
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      Yes

      I will never forget my first love. I don't think anyone can. Well unless it was some horid hell-like relationship or something But other than that...the first love is always the most memorable...