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Desire (Explicit)




Fuck me
Like you
Owe me money

Whisper

Extravagent
Rythmic

Syllables


(Acrostic)

A contest entry

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  • Balashi13
    June 28

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    Well, that first word certainly grabs the reader's attention! I guess you had to find an "F" word somewhere. Never heard of Acrostic poetry before. I'll have to try it.

  • beautifull-ugly228
    May 25
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    WOW I LIKE IT A LOT KEEP IT UP


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 14

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    That was just great. The power within this short acrostic was amazingly-good. Keep writing. Good luck in the contest.

    Wayne Leon


  • LilyRose
    January 27
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    Dew

    ...you never matched a certain flower per se with your write, though never required...but a rose would do sensually with this write and the "thorn" would match your first commanding visual line. I loved the middle, immensely "Whisper" the tenderness of pause, then the rise and movement in the last portion of the write lavish...nice job.