Look deep in your heart,
and try to forgive me!
Look deep in your heart,
Can't you see how much this hurts me?
Look deep in your heart,
Be honest and kind to me please!
Look deep in your heart,
Be caring and helpful to me please!
Look deep in your heart,
Be forgiving and funny to me please!
Look deep in your heart,
Can't you forgive me?
Look deep in your heart,
Please see I still like you!
Look deep in your heart,
Please see I'm doing all I can!
Look deep in your heart,
Please see I need a friend now more than ever!
Look deep in your heart,
Can't you see mines broken?
Author notes
This is something that happened to me at school between me and one of my closest friends!It just broke my heart because I lost her as my friend during this stupid fight!
Option #1 and #5 for contest "Options 8 of them"
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Comments
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thanks!
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Great repition, it makes the poem! Great expression of feelings through poetry. Great write and good luck in the contest!
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Things like this have happened to me before... But things always worked out in the end. Some friends have come back, and the ones that didn't really weren't my real friends anyway.
Great write and thanks for sharing!
~Cassie
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All one can do when they have done something wrong is say sorry and be truthful. Apologize and don't make the same mistake twice. If they are a true friend they will be friends again; if not, then they are not needed anyway.
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I can only hope that you repair your relationship with your dear friend, and that it can be salvaged. Friendships are a very special thing. Good luck with it.
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this is a nice poem on your feelings for your friend i hope you and her make up it takes a long time to build up true relationships its part of life living and learning by your actions thank you for sharing this poem
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I hope she reads this and you re-gain the friendship. This is a nice expression of love and friendship. Thank you for sharing with the group.
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Everyone goes through this at some point in their life. I hope that you will be able to regain this lost friendship. Thank you for sharing this with the group.
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Really sad.
Yea, sometimes we do silly things, and it takes time to forgive and forget. So i just wish you and your good friend will be on good terms in due time
I felt that the poem would've flowed better if the exclamation marks were replaced with fullstops. I don't know if you meant for it to be shouted, but that's how I feel
Thanks and best of luck
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Wow
This is lovely. The repetition worked so well throuhout the poem. It was truely fantastic. I hope that everything between you and your friend is OK now.
Thanks for entering my contest!
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Very good
If you never look and be aware of another persons expressions and their eyes you can never see the pain they feel . Hidden unspoken of and waiting for the other person to say Im sorry but they never looked . Always make a practice with loved ones and friends to read their body language and know the truth of how they truly feel
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AWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG! This is soo sad! I totally know what you mean. It was a stupid fight and she sounds like she doesn't care that what she said could hurt you. Ugh! Drama queen.
I really like this poem, btw.
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paws, is this with PAM? isn't? 
GREAT *sob*
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This is a great poem. Best of luck in my contest
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