Absolute blackness crushes downward,
Erasing, forever, gay hearts.
Immortal joy killed.
Life murdered.
No other plague quells radiance so totally.
Unhappiness visits,
Whilst X-raying yesterday's zeal
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650 points, ended February 5, 2008, 25 entries
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dark yet of the day as it speaks true of a disturbing imbalance.
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This is very unique to say the least.It is so dark, yet it tells a superb story.Thank you for sharing this piece with us and best of luck in the contest
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