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[ I dont think a heart could break this much ]

I dont think a heart could break this much
each day you take more & more
you say you want me in your life
I get upset at you then you get mad at me

how are you going to ask me to wait
you dont ask me how I feel about your plans
you've made your mind up on your own so thats how its going to be

you get mad at me more for backing away from your touch
how can you expect me to stand here while you leave my heart broken & sore
yet I hurt more and more when you lie and say you want me as your wife
you've ruined my life to a certain degree

this was your choice & my new fate
I'll find a way on my own just like you did I'll build my new life with just these hands
no matter what I chose your the one who left me

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  • cgirl0410 silver member
    February 21, 2008

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    Wow, love that last line. It always seem to turn out this way. Can't figure out where it went wrong. Great piece. - cgirl0410