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Until You Come Home Again

Cant sleep,
Its almost two.
Constant thinking,
With nothing to do.
To late to get up.
To early to get up.
Thoughts of you swirling
In my head
Reminding me of
My very lonely bed

Too lonely for me
I get up for some air
The floor very cold
Because my feet are bare

Walking out the door
I stare out into the sky,
I pick out a star
And wish that I could fly.
Fly to you
Where ever you are
Across time and space
No matter how far.

But my wish isn’t granted
I stand here alone
Very cold and sad
Until you come home

But I get some comfort
Knowing we both look
Up at the same sky
Distance doesn’t matter
And my tears
Completely dry

Back in my room
I light a match
I hold it to a candle
And watch it catch
I leave it for you
Burning so bright
To chase away
The loneliness of the night

For you I love,
For you I wait,
For you…
My love and my friend
Until…
You come home again

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  • Robbwindow
    February 25, 2008
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    Hey..

    This rythme scheme is cool, well done!


  • Tilted-Misschief
    February 17, 2008
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    Awww Tabbz!
    This is such an amazing poem =]
    Tis sad and shows real emotion.

    I to look up to the sky at night and knowing that my loved ones across the world look at the same sky makes things a little easier and yet still sad that Im not close.

    You have done an awesome job hun

    nash xx


  • Koenigsreich
    January 27, 2008

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    You know, I hated being on the other side of the world, thinking back to home and knowing that somewhere my loved ones were looking at the same moon. This is awesome, Tabbs. Keep it up!


  • bananasfoster42
    January 27, 2008
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    this is so sweet. great write!