While laying in my hammock one day
I focused on the wind
I tried something I'd never before
and behold my soul had grinned.
I asked the wind a question
I did seek and then I found
That the wind, it hears my wishes
and answers with soft sound
My query was to find out if God
could use invisible breeze
to have a conversation
and reply to all my plea's
My heart was beating furiously
I found what I was looking for
There was no denying that God was closer
than I'd ever felt before
The answers were not human words
or writing in the sky
Instead the wind's intensity
changed with each of my questions, 'Why?'
I knew there must have been a way
for God to talk to me
Yes, he had used the wind of course
Just try it and you'll see.
Author notes
Honey buns do not have honey
A contest entry
- 5 options for the creative poet (19) by bananasfoster42.
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Comments
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This is lovely!
I like the relvance of it. It made me curious and kept my attention. There'ss something in the authors notes you need to have however.
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Thank you for your encouraging comment. Sorry about the authors notes. I have fixed it all up if that helps, Cathy
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Thanks very much!
Thank you for fixing it! And sorry it took me so long to get around to judging this.
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this is awesome, nice take on the prompt! thanks for the entry
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