Discarded avenues
leave torturous remains.
Though I drift on, free
dwelling in new domains.
Androgyny calls my name.
Softness echoes near
feathers of love, untamed,
stroking solitude, serenely
as the future is proclaimed.
I shall never be the same.
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Hood Winked!!
We are affected by life experiences they help to make us who we are ever changing and evolving. There is much depth and wisdom to these lines. Very well crafted your pen moves across the page leaving the reader with much to ponder over.
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i love the feathered imagery here, i tend to go for that a lot in my poems too, it ruffles the imagination, a good poem.
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deep thoughts love the language, and WOW you really blew me away with this one! excellent take on the prompt~blessings always~ Trisha CONGRATS ON THE GOLD
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I had forgotten how excellent your poems are
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awesome
very deep layered poem! i love it!! your work never ceases to amaze me! you are so talented! congrats on the well deserved gold!!
blessings and *stomps
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Loved every single nuance, placed so perfectly in this poetry. I will have to purchase your Book in February. I see you are one talented poet. Don't know why I didn't know this until now.
I love the use of "Androgyny"! I am so in tuned with the male and female counterparts of me. It is good to know that you are as well.
Congratulations on a well earned Gold Cup!
Much Love & Blessed Be ♥
Renee
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Oh this was just wonderful on so many different levels. Then I saw the contest and the gold! Bravo!
Marianne
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First of all congratulations on the Gold,
For a quickie it is sure filled with deep thoughts from past into the future,
well done my Dear friend well done,
Love and Light
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this was totaly mind blowing it was so good . hope you have a great day
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i love the style you chose for this one!
incredibly deep piece! good luck in the contest!
mike -
This is a very interesting read. A great poem. I hope you had as much fun writing as I did reading. Good luck
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Love = Hurt. Sometimes you have to think IS it better to love and lost as to have never loved at all... Or is it better to not open ya heart and let it pass by?? I dunno Good write matey my wittle tamamahara
Love ya
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