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A Sweet Blessing

Serene thoughts
of when we met
roam my mind

Delightful
love at first site
a great day

Cuddling
holding you close
in our bed

Looking in your eyes
letting go of my cares
and the world stands still
in that moment in time

With each loving touch
taking my breath away
knowing only you
hold the key to my heart

 

Unlocking my soul

leting my spirit rise

to be creative

to show you how I feel

 

A lady

of elegance

and of poise

 

So many

things I could say

about you

 

You are fun

speacle to me

sweet joy

 

Your smile warms me like the rays of the sun 

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I can give this to someone one day it is a Nibor

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  • Samplette gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    This is a very loving and passionate write. Full of emotion and quite sensual. Beautifully penned. A great read.
    Sam


  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    February 27, 2008
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    So Beautiful

    What a lovely, emotion filled poem, Robin. Just when I think your beautiful poetry can't get any better...it does! This left me with such a sweet feeling; close to blissful, I'd say! I think you need to compile all of your amazing love poems, and have them published. Work like this deserves to be shared with the world. Simply lovely!

    Paula


  • madskillbassist1
    February 11, 2008
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    I can feel the feelings of love.


  • creationsfromheart
    February 10, 2008
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    a sweet write, you may want to go through and check spelling again, but this is so sweet.