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These Vows

The air I breathe
the heartbeat in my chest
the vowels I take with you
are for real and I hold true

Though the crazy in love feeling may fade
I will always love you
I hope you know that no matter what my heart is yours
no fight can change that

To love, honor, and cherish is what I said
and to the grave I take them

I will always be there and hope you feel the same

I hold you dear as my best friend
and my extraordinary wife

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Some day I can say this to some one

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  • JLynn-4God
    June 11

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    Wow

    VERY great poem.... lol even more so now that I know why you wrote it. lol


  • LdyBrknWing gold member
    February 27, 2008
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    So Beautiful

    Robin, this brought tears to my eyes, and touched my heart so very deeply! There's not a woman alive who doesn't long to know that the man she loves feels this way about her; and you've expressed those feelings in such a lovely way. This will go down as one of your most beautiful and poingant love poems. Beautiful, as always!

    Paula

  • SueRee
    February 10, 2008

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    Distracting

    After the second read I could substitute VOWS for Vowels. There was no hidden A, E, I Owe You in there,
    so the sentiment for vows will be great for your future Miss Right. Great thought.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Jonathan Wikkins silver member
    February 9, 2008
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    one day i feel you will have that opportunity to say these things to someone!

    just make sure you mean them, and harder even still, that she knows...

    "I will always be there and hope you feel the same

    I hold you dear as my best friends
    and my extraordinary wife"

    great ending!

    mike, aka jonathan wikkin