The air I breathe
the heartbeat in my chest
the vowels I take with you
are for real and I hold true
Though the crazy in love feeling may fade
I will always love you
I hope you know that no matter what my heart is yours
no fight can change that
To love, honor, and cherish is what I said
and to the grave I take them
I will always be there and hope you feel the same
I hold you dear as my best friend
and my extraordinary wife
Author notes
Some day I can say this to some one
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wow i have one titled our vows not sure it is on allpoetry yet but this is so like that one maybe we should get married gr8 minds think alike they say lol seriously i try hard that is why my marriage works i flirt then come back to him and i flirt a whole hell of a lot so watch out or i may invite you to become my next teasing victim unless u want 2 b come my 1st vampire experience lol
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Wow
VERY great poem.... lol even more so now that I know why you wrote it. lol
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So Beautiful
Robin, this brought tears to my eyes, and touched my heart so very deeply! There's not a woman alive who doesn't long to know that the man she loves feels this way about her; and you've expressed those feelings in such a lovely way. This will go down as one of your most beautiful and poingant love poems. Beautiful, as always!
Paula
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Distracting
After the second read I could substitute VOWS for Vowels. There was no hidden A, E, I Owe You in there,
so the sentiment for vows will be great for your future Miss Right. Great thought.
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one day i feel you will have that opportunity to say these things to someone!
just make sure you mean them, and harder even still, that she knows...
"I will always be there and hope you feel the same
I hold you dear as my best friends
and my extraordinary wife"
great ending!
mike, aka jonathan wikkin
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