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Drone

It's time, 10 to 8
Here with me you stand
Touch me, feel me
Remember I'm yours while I'm alone
While my screams are for the deaf
This squished drone has nothing to do
Scream, yell and try to attack
But your skin loves it
So keep playing with me
I'm choking with your touch
Those tears of your little Johnson
But remember I can also whine
Symptoms also appear
Getting fat but don't care
Dear Brother, we're going to have a son
And you think it will go away?
Not enough with just sex?
Now you're a blood thirsty?
You have to beat me
Make me bleed and screech
Yes, beat me
Ensure my teeth won't speak
Bite my gums until they rot
But you know you can't kill me
Or do you have another toy?
Plastic love, that's what you get
The only difference is that I scream
Flawing every skin piece on me
But you know I'm your master
As long as you take me
You are mine
Knives can be used
They will refresh your memory
Now fuck off, die
Die before I get you
Before you end with the fuck
You're filthy and shameful
But you still have to live that curse
Take me again
And remind me you need me
Because no one accepts a rotten worm like you

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    April 14, 2008
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    I feel your pain with each expression of torture you have expressed and been put through. I don't know how anyone can treat someone this way, really hurt them. The self hate it would take to allow yourself to hurt someone too... I like your metaphor of a drone!


  • Laura-Critchley
    March 30, 2008

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    A very well written piece filled with anger and well deserved venom.

    Take care, hun.

    Laura aka Maliha.


  • InMyFlames
    January 26, 2008

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    very well, done you need to fix up your authors notes though, can you please do that as soon as possible, thanks for your entry and keep up the great work


  • O.o
    January 26, 2008
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    sad...a wonderful web of words woven by a talanted poet. Keep it up