Sick of
my selfishness
foolishness
Hating you
more now & now
that I am here
crying here
dying here
trying here
. . .
my ratty hair
doesn't care
when you're here
a single tear
to swallow,
slurp
into insanity
my vulgarness shall burp
infected on
a single song
writing you
an I love you
left alone
by the phone
By the way
I left today
with my selfishness
foolishness
crying here
trying here
dying here
denying here
abiding here
by your rules
we two, are fools
In. Love.
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very interesting write from you. i like the form that you used. thank you for sharing this with me and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the very near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Interesting write. It's beautiful and haunting and bittersweet. At least, that's how I see it. Great write. I like the way you structured it, as well as the repetition. Thank you for featuring this piece
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This is a very emotional poem and I loved reading it. Very well written. Keep up the great work.
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Wow! This is a very forceful and emotional poem. I can certainly relate to the meaning and the style of it. I am feeling someething like this now so this hits me pretty deep especially after it all sinks in. Very powerful indeed!!
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i love the emotion here
an overall great write
keep it up :
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