Life is a journey,
Its a long and winding road,
Full of decisions,
Every second of it counts.
Its spent in many different ways,
Surprises, happiness and sorrow.
Along the way, you meet new people.
Just one big part party,
Of everyone to of lived, no one
Understands the meaning of life, but
Remember that life is a privilege,
Not a right,
Everyone is equal,
You, me and everybody else
A contest entry
- livin this crazy thing called life by dreamweaver08.
475 points, ended February 8, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - SEEKING AP FAMILY by Three Doves.
525 points, ended February 25, 2008, 36 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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EXPRESSED WELL
THE BEAUTY OF TRUTH UNDERSTOOD. THANK YOU FOR ENTERING YOUR THOUGHTS AND PLEASE CONTINUE TO LIVE AND BREATHE THE TRUTH ALSO PLEASE PLACE YOUR USERNAME AND FAMILY PREFERENCE IN YOUR RESPONSE TO MY COMMENT. THANK YOU.
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ap daughter please
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AP family
Hi, thank for the comment on my poem,
if you don't mind i'll be an AP daughter, thanks!
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I like it it is interesting.
You have composed a very thoughtful poem on life. You are so right about everyone being equal that has always been my thought about life. That is something that everyone should learn and a concept that we should all embrace. If people did there would not be so much strife in the world. For one so young you have a wonderful grasp on just what life means. Keep up the good thoughts and keep on writing. I realy liked this.
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i think u mean have lived, not of lived. or u mean it but wrote it as shaksperee thingie..
other than that, it was reeeeally good...
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oh, it means of everyone who has lived on this earth, no one knows what the meaning of life is.
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i dont get that 9th line
"Of everyone to of..."???????
other than that it was good
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you didnt write sweet in your notes or your option, please do so or ill have to dq you. sorry
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I'll comment for you!
Nice poem. The message is clear and I hope people listen to it. Keep on writing
BTW, what option did you choose to write about?
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this is very good, i like the creativity. good luck
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Why has no one commented?
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