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Life

Life is a journey,
Its a long and winding road,
Full of decisions,
Every second of it counts.

Its spent in many different ways,
Surprises, happiness and sorrow.

Along the way, you meet new people.

Just one big part party,
Of everyone to of lived, no one
Understands the meaning of life, but
Remember that life is a privilege,
Not a right,
Everyone is equal,
You, me and everybody else

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  • Three Doves
    February 17, 2008

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    EXPRESSED WELL

    THE BEAUTY OF TRUTH UNDERSTOOD. THANK YOU FOR ENTERING YOUR THOUGHTS AND PLEASE CONTINUE TO LIVE AND BREATHE THE TRUTH ALSO PLEASE PLACE YOUR USERNAME AND FAMILY PREFERENCE IN YOUR RESPONSE TO MY COMMENT. THANK YOU.

  • eternal-devotion
    February 16, 2008

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    I like it it is interesting.

    You have composed a very thoughtful poem on life. You are so right about everyone being equal that has always been my thought about life. That is something that everyone should learn and a concept that we should all embrace. If people did there would not be so much strife in the world. For one so young you have a wonderful grasp on just what life means. Keep up the good thoughts and keep on writing. I realy liked this.


  • photay.poetry
    February 15, 2008

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    i think u mean have lived, not of lived. or u mean it but wrote it as shaksperee thingie..

    other than that, it was reeeeally good...


  • RainbowGirl257
    February 9, 2008
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    oh, it means of everyone who has lived on this earth, no one knows what the meaning of life is.


  • LifeOfNoMercy
    February 8, 2008
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    i dont get that 9th line
    "Of everyone to of..."???????

    other than that it was good


  • dreamweaver08
    February 3, 2008
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    you didnt write sweet in your notes or your option, please do so or ill have to dq you. sorry


  • fantasysmurf
    February 2, 2008

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    I'll comment for you!

    Nice poem. The message is clear and I hope people listen to it. Keep on writing
    BTW, what option did you choose to write about?

  • dreamweaver08
    February 2, 2008
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    this is very good, i like the creativity. good luck

  • RainbowGirl257
    February 1, 2008
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    Why has no one commented?

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