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Time won't tell

Time won't tell
the mistakes I've made
Time won't tell
where I went wrong
Time won't tell
don't put faith in the past
Time won't tell
how we got left behind
Time won't tell
the mistakes of man
Time won't tell
cause we'll be gone hand in hand


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Option One

A contest entry

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  • Peachy
    May 4, 2008

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    True words, I like what it said and how it said it
    Repetitions are fun to read and this poem was actually really good!
    Nice last line, made me sit up and pay attention
    Good Write!


  • LostInTheDream
    January 27, 2008
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    Its good!

    I like this piece, I actually really like repititions. Thanx for entering, and good luck!