Like an angel on your shoulder
I'll be here for you
to listen and understand
every emotion you feel
all of your worries and doubts
Author notes
25 Words
A contest entry
- Looking for Favorites by just-an-amateur.
600 points, ended February 10, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
Comments
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A sweet and simple write with a true, heart-felt message. We all need someone like this, who is here in the thick and the thin. A true friend you are. The picture added to the overall appeal of this write as well as your excellent use of imagery. Thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest!
~M~
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Beautiful words and sentiments here with an eye-catching Picture to go with it.
All well done, my Friend!
David
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wow, this is such an awesome poem and the picture that you chose for this fits your poem perfectly.. This is so beautiful.
good luck in the contest
kat
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awww...
this is so pretty, love that picture, blends well with your words my friend. Good luck!
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I love this poem. I think you have not only met the contest criteria but you have also captured the essences of the picture that you chose to go with your poem. This is quite an awesome and well written piece of poetry.
Midnight
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awww this is sweet, and like a wonderful friend, I know that this is true of you. Best to you in the contest wonderful take on the prompt
~blessings always~ Trisha
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