I never wanted to hurt anyone,
Or make someone cry,
But as the days go by,
it always seems,
one will cry.
I feel its mainly my fault.
Like I drifted away with their happiness,
I didn't mean to take.
I wish I could go back,
Knowing all I do.
I know who is really true,
And never was treated as so.
I know I wronged many and I would take it back now,
All the way to adam and eve.
The world would be happy,
People would be peaceful.
And we would all be free.
Please tell me what you think
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a very sad write , sometimes we all wish that we could go back in time and change things but we must move forward and make the best of what is instead of looking back we must look forward
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I guess what I really like about this poem is the breadth - it is not about your own little world but embraces the wide world's problems and how you feel you want to bring peace and harmony to us all - a noble sentiment, if I may say so. I like you as a person since your motives are generous and unselfish.
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This was beautiful, and truthfully sad. I can relate
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(i'd give you three applause if I had more points.)
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* sniff *
I'm not much of a critic, but I know what I like. Good Job. -
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hi
How are you? Its been a long time since I talked to you. Are you okay? Whats up? -
awe
thanks
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powerful write and touching poem. You are truely something. You are going to become a known writer on day.I know you would change the world if you had a chance. You would right the wrong. Take hope you are a great Sis and person and I will continue to love you.Your brother Joe.
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awe
Thanks bro. Did I ever tell you that one of my poems got published? Its this one http://allpoetry.com/poem/2651060 I love you to bro your awesome
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