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Silky Moonlight Glow

A silky moonlight glow
of a tangerine shade
blanketing the world's sinister secrets
all in this one moonlit evening.
The dark shadows of hatred, violence
soaked up into a moon of radiance~
hidden
by a silky moonlight glow
of a tangerine shade.

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  • deathcorelax
    April 17, 2008
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    wow i couldnt imagine writing that well at 11 years old. great job


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 29, 2008

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    Lovely thoughts!

    "blanketing the world's sinister secrets
    all in this one moonlit evening.
    The dark shadows of hatred, violence
    soaked up into a moon of radiance~"

    So unique this is...

    Lynda


  • Mezclita
    January 27, 2008

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    Very Nice!

    Great clear descriptions and a strong ending with the emphasis and pause on "hidden"... much liked it all! <3 Alex


  • Peteskid gold member
    January 26, 2008

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    Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck to you in the judging...PK

    Comment in the wonderful encouraging style of Rowan:
    "Gorgeous, has a soft and soothing quality, so optimistic, we might all speak these words of hope."