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Aqua

Blue is the colour
Of Water and Air
Of Sky and Heaven
Of You...

Mammilian kin
So lonely in the blue
I remember the time we swam with You
And for You...

You sang us song's
Until Father came home
And always protected us
Wherever We go...

But now the Alien
Is killing our spawn
But the killin' cyan gwan!
Jah is with You...

Swim beautiful
Aqua
Swim free
You.

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  • Vengence
    January 26, 2008
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    THIS IS A POEM OF PRAYER FOR THE CREW OF STEVE IRWIN, AND IN MEMORY OF A TRUE SON OF GOD- MR.IRWIN HIMSELF, RIP MY FRIEND X AND A SOLEMN BLESSING TO THE KIN IN THE SEAS...