Cobalt sky at midnight,
moon, an ewer of milk
spilling from the stars
in crystalline delight.
Earth below, a blanket
spread over the
recalcitrant scene.
In a list
A contest entry
- Looking for Favorites by just-an-amateur.
600 points, ended February 10, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ahhh, big words. he he Just kidding. But I did have to look up recalcitrant. That one got me. I loved your use of punctuation because it added instead of deducting from your write (which usually happens when I use punctuation). Your imagery is breathtaking and to be honest, you inspired a write of my own. I haven't posted it yet but I'll get around to it soon after it has some editing done to it. Thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest!
~M~
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this is a beautifuh shines alot in your words.it just shows talent and is an inspiring piece. best of luck
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