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Exorbitant

Lingering

  in memory

    are visions

       still surviving

 

           in a logic proof shell


       that should have been 

     held sacred, 

   safe and

 hidden


 are compromised in usury

 

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  • AJ Morelli gold member
    February 10, 2008
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    thanks so much for entering such a lovely entry in the contest...


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  • wendymolly
    January 29, 2008
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    memories and the usual locked up in a logiced proof shaell... simply put... Awsomely conveyed!


  • tara wilson gold member
    January 26, 2008

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    "logic proof shell"

    I really like that..I have some of these kinds of memories lingering too...