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Philosopher’s stone


some people seem to think
the poem is supposed to be some magic capsule
a pill full of oil and mineral medicine
to make the world supple so it can be bent
into some perfect loop

the poem is some magic capsule
a pill filled of oil and mineral medicine
to make the world supple
to bend into some perfect loop

whenever an author or poem is mentioned on forum grounds
a reference link should be automatically added
but only for dead poets

as living poets must
struggle up arcadian slops
to craters filled with liquid rock
to throw themselves into
in hopes to cast their hollow mold
in cooling stone.

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