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Seems To Be Another Hike

Seems to be just a little thing
Telling me what you couldn't say
Feelings torn so deep -deep in me
Carries you away from what we really need
-what we really need
From what we really see.

Seems to me just a little thing
Telling me what you couldn't say
Feelings torn so deep -deep in me
Carries me away from what we really need
-what we really need
From what we really need!

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Words and Music by "Sing and Hill"

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  • light to a dreamer gold member
    October 24
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    This was well written and gave me chills. I like this a lot and will make anyone think.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    September 25

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    Dude you so sing like" beautiful" and your tone
    well lets just say its smooth,Video Poems great
    concept, no really your very talented,

    with blessings and love

    Rend