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Cat in the Dark

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Are you lonely, my little cat?
With a look so sad
Hiding in the dark like dead
Tell me what is in your head

 

For hours and hours you didn’t move
Behind the column grey and blue
The air out there is icy cool
Come close, we'll make a pair of two

 

I see wonders in your eyes
I see you’re quiet, but not shy
Deep warmth in you disguised
A face full of despise

 

Are you there being abandoned?
Mourning over unforgettable moments
Stifled in this dead silence......
just to have your whine dampened

 

 

 

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  • agazeley gold member
    June 7, 2008

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    Not a bad beginning

    This starts off well then falls away - I think you should revise it as it has potential to be great.

    I love the picture