night known as cold,
known as dark or scary,
but night is no ordinary thing,
it's filled with love and laughter,
comfort and contentment,
pain is embellished and no one fears,
the consistency of it's beauty is one of many,
the only light is of the crescent shaped moon,
life is just a dim object,
but filled with miracles,
and the darkness is just mer imagination,
it's warm and vowellike,
hatered is no object,
but to most, night is a cold, dark, time,
for me is just astonishing
A contest entry
- Writer's Choice by Peteskid.
1000 points, ended February 3, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I love how you expressed how moonlight makes you feel...
Lovely poem
Lynda
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VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!
I am also one who sees so much beauty in the night.
To me there seems so much peace and quiet in the dark of night.
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Thank you for this fine entry into the contest, and best of luck to you in the judging...PK
This Comment in the style of Poetryality:
The moon sometimes leaves me slightly hypnotized, under a spell of mood and mystery...love the bright full moon and this wonderful poem shines like the full harvest moon so full of feelings..."
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