As I look into the sky
I see the softer side of night
The tangerine autumn moon
Glowing oh so bright
When I was growing up
We called it a harvest moon
Songs so sweetly sung
Each with a lovely tune
In the softer side of night
Gentle breezes blow
See blossoms bloom so bright
Giving love a brighter glow
Author notes
option # 3
A contest entry
- Writer's Choice by Peteskid.
1000 points, ended February 3, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Say what you think
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I love how you blended love with the beauty of nature:
"In the softer side of night
Gentle breezes blow
See blossoms bloom so bright
Giving love a brighter glow"
lovely rhyme as well!
Lynda
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Thank you poet2angels, so glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
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Absolute beauty. I too love that side of night...nights when one could be outside and really live in the night.
Just beautiful and well-written.
Wolfie
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Thank you Wolfie for your comments. I really like your little tweety bird.
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Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck to you in the judging...PK
Comment in the style of Danna Hobart:
"Rhyme is not my favorite form but I have to admit this one is really good, it has a soft quality that brings out the message of the beauty nature and the feeling of night...well done..."
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