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japanese haiku5 -lust



  the passionte kiss
you're tender chest on my thighs
those shackles i'm in
your damn body against mine

  my heart skips a beat
you're hands fulfill my desires
my breathing is fast
i can have you at long last

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  • ImmanuelC888
    January 26, 2008
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    I'm no really into this haiku thing, but I enjoyed this one pretty much.