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Alone and Hallow

This overwhelming emptiness
Consumes me and soul

Unwanted hated, dark abyss 

A blackend empty hole

 

Darker then a midnight shadow

Broken and apart

Unlush souless empty meadow 

Pitted in my heart

  

Alone I am. and hallow

No depth left here to see

I feel so blindly shallow

What have you done to me

 

Ripped it out of me

Tangled on my heart

All that was of me

No place left to start

 

You know how much I love you

I told you each and every day

How i just can't live without you 

These feelings lift won't go away 

 

I die inside more each day

Each lingering passing thought

It's your fault they'll never stray

These feelings that you brought

 

How I wish I could erase it all

Memories of me and you

Open my heart and let them fall

Down deep past oceans view

 

These feelings I can no longer atone

Forgoten, hallow and alone

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  • Til the Day I Die
    March 12, 2008
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    O.o

    wow very deep and emotional i love it keep up the good work


  • OktoberSchatten
    January 28, 2008
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    very deep and amazingly beautiful and emotional.
    i do love!


    • DarkBlaze128
      January 29, 2008
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      thank you, i suppose, it feels a little better getting it out in words, but it still hurts ..