Though it would seem a lighter road
is the one you want to travel
you are continually making choices
that require puzzles to unravel
You believe in yourself
and your abililty to see
beyond whatever gets in the way
of feeling spirited and free
You have strength inside
fuelled by someone stronger
For your father lives on in you
Roads are scary no longer.
A contest entry
- Welcome to My Nightmare by HeavenScent4U.
500 points, ended February 14, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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For being so short I really liked this, it was very intelligent. The second stanza didn't flow as well as the rest of it but I loved it non the less
thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed
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I love the last two lines for if you have that special spirit with you always you can face anything.a lovely powm.Take care and good luck, Ros



