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The Conqueror



Though it would seem a lighter road
is the one you want to travel
you are continually making choices
that require puzzles to unravel

You believe in yourself
and your abililty to see
beyond whatever gets in the way
of feeling spirited and free

You have strength inside
fuelled by someone stronger
For your father lives on in you
Roads are scary no longer.

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  • HeavenScent4U
    February 10, 2008

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    For being so short I really liked this, it was very intelligent. The second stanza didn't flow as well as the rest of it but I loved it non the less thanks for entering and good luck. be well and be blessed


  • Gwenevere
    January 27, 2008

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    I love the last two lines for if you have that special spirit with you always you can face anything.a lovely powm.Take care and good luck, Ros