I have so much love for you that
I feel like holding on tight
But I know that it is best for you
to be a free spirit burning bright.
You are like a butterfly in my open hand
Free to fly, but hoping you'll come back to me
I have so much love for you that
even though its so very hard to let go
and risk losing more love
than you will ever know....
For you, I will.
Author notes
Option #2 - Jealousy
A contest entry
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Comments
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This does a fantastic job of reflecting pure jealousy - well done!
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You are like a butterfly in my open hand
Free to fly, but hoping you'll come back to me
Beautifully penned. Best of luck. -
the butterfly is a fantastic metaphor and "free spirit burning bright" is one of my favourite lines now!
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This is a great poem. Thank you for putting in your authors comment box the title number. Best of luck in my contest
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