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Music

Music is my passion,

Cascading around me like unfurling winds,

Pushing me sideways,

Forcing me to swim,

A lover that abides,

To my every thought or whim




Paul Dawson (Darkimagination)

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  • Tqop
    February 4

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    Excellent.

    Thanks for sharing this with us. I wish I could play the music I have in my head. Maybe one day I will. Yes, one day I will. Nice poem, about what your passion is.

    And what it does to you.

    Very good poem.

    I loved it!


  • Evinde
    January 24

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    It descibes very well how you feel about your passion for music. I like how you personified it at the end, and how you not only affect it, but how it affects you.
    Evinde


  • Grey Mouser
    January 17

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    Music is poetry that many wish they could produce. So we live it in enjoyment and pure pleasure for what it is, says and how it makes us feel. Very nicely written.
    Best to you!
    GM


  • HaleyMary
    January 26, 2008

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    Beautiful write. Good flow. Music is a very powerful art form and I think it's great if you feel passionate about it. Whether it's singing, dancing, writing, or playing music, it's all wonderful. Keep writing.