She reapplies her make up,
smudged
like his promises,
covering her scars
she covers his back.
although she tries
she cannot paint
her bruised heart.
A contest entry
- twenty five by AJ Morelli.
2500 points, ended February 16, 2008, 34 entries
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this is really nice...
thanks for sharing it here
al -
wonder in awe!!!!
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I realy like this piece and its depth. A great piece!
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Short and sweet...I think this could have been expanded upon but it still holds it own. Great job.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe** -
I really like this one..very powerful ending..
the 'reapplies' is perfect in this..sad that she can't recolor her heart..
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Excellent...
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