Come tell me Lies,
Like the one you like to hear,
Of moonlite nights,
where perfume rules,
and you let completely go,
Tell me the secrets
You've never told, Your deepest desires,
The things you hope for
Tell me what you think,
when you touch yourself,
Tell me some lies
and I'll tell you a few,
I'll tell you of your beauty,
How great you make me feel,
The tingles running down my spine,
When you are aw so near,
I'll tell you of how
I long to hold you tight,
Oh wait a second,
I'd be telling you the truth
Author notes
Come tell me Lies, And I'll tell you a few
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Beautiful start...
You developed the poem nicely...
and then the end...a masterly stroke..
A brilliant write!
Galaxy2
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Charlie this is tastefully passionate..you write is such away to make the mind of the reader take one direct and bring it totally around through your last line. Creative imagery flowing throughout your words impacted in your last few to the emotions. It is wonderful to see you writing again. You have such a natural and beautiful talent.
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oh my, this was amazing to read.
It is beautiful and tender and yet
you keep the title in the back of your
mind as you read and realize these are
lies. then the ending, wow, so sad.
when one of the couple, is in love
and it is not reciprocated. so sad.
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