Frozen world shuts me out.
Through the glass is no view.
Heart of ice, veins of frozen glass.
Peer, searching for signs of life,
but this frozen shell encloses me.
Nevertime has grasped me by my throat
and dragged my soul to some far shore of
pain and mutilation, where blood
runs with the waters of condemnation.
Razor, razor, where have you hidden.
Come sniff out my veins and empty them.
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600 points, ended February 11, 2008, 11 entries
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"Razor, razor, where have you hidden.
Come sniff out my veins and empty them."
Very powerful write. The last two lines stand out to me the most. The emotion that was put into this feels so genuine. Wonderful write! Good luck! -
this is a really deep write and i could relate to your words as i am an ex cutter and i always end up shutting the world out. this is such a powerful write
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Wow this is really deep, I don't cut but I can relate to the world being shut out. I don't go anywhere without Jason not even outside so I am a prisoner in my own home. It is a awful way to live. Maybe oneday I can overcome my demons who still haunt me to this day. Excellent write, worthy of the Gold
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life is too precious to change it for anything
Frozen world only shuts us out
But the razor's worse than harmful thoughts
Life is the agreement of YOUR nods
Don't freeze. Gather strength and make life loud
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Wonderful...hope you win...good luck...
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