soft romance
spelt elgantly
in petals
bringing the rose
gently down
brushing it
against my collar bone
you crawl towards me
kissing my forehead
I shiver
and hold my breath
then you slowly slide it down
until you reach my stomach
encircle the soft petals
I close my eyes
and ruffle your hair
wondering where
all these moments went
then you come up to me
look into my eyes
with that intense stare
and tell me
'I love you'
I smile
and kiss your cheeks
'how can you resist'?
we are left
in a tight embrace
Author notes
option 4~ ROSE
((option 4~ love))
A contest entry
- Life Changing...lots of options! by ShadowsMidnightRose.
1000 points, ended January 28, 2008, 35 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Please tell me what you think
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How can one? thanks for your entry
lol
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Though I'd like to see proper capitalization and punctuation here, the words themselves are very expressive of the love you obviously feel. Good write.
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You have captured some great imagery within the lines of this poem and I like that
Thank you for entering the contest, I wish you the very best!
Leander -
congrats first off on the Gold this won for you.
I understand why it did for it was just beautiful
Best of luck with this in all those contests you are in.
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very beautiful
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This is beautiful! I'm nearly speachless, and that's um... yeah, that never happens. Please, please, please put your option number for me in your author's notes. This is truly beautiful, and I don't want to have to DQ it. Thanks for entering it!
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Very well put together, i love how you have accomplished this wonderful piece. I especially love how the rose is a key part of your love. Perfectly written!
Thank you for entering my contest, and good luck! -
What a beautiful and tender piece of
poetry you have penned here. It is
romantic and sweet without loosing its
innocence. wonderful job on this one.
good luck in the contest.
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