A body, a power, a mind, a soul
A young man's passion is dwindling like gold
The power, the pain, the wonder & life
Striped away from the young man, so bright
Spinning madly
The world forgets to care.
No pleasure left in anything.
Nothing left but sin
The sound of sneakers
On make shift courts
Has ceased & is unbroken
Like the sobs from a heart broken brother
The crying, the fighting
Their hatred towards man
The silly young boy
Becomes a stronger young man
The walls are closing in
And as he hold his sobbing mother tight
He pushes back the walls
Closing in so tight
Well....suppose you can give me something to work with?
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This kind of reminds me of my work as a nurse. I work in a nursing home so I see a lot of this kind of thing.
Undone would be a great title.
I hope you come back and finish soon.
"Spinning madly
The world forgets to care.
No pleasure left in anything.
No love to be held within." -
WOW THAT WAS AWESOME
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