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Confusion

You told me you'd always be here for me,
through it all, the laughter and the tears.
You promised me that I'd never be alone again,
that I'd never have to go through anything alone again.

So far you've kept your promises big and small,
well up until recently that is.
I started crying a little more than I used to,
and you were no longer there for me to talk to.

You ask me why I cry so much lately,
I tell you it's the only way I know to deal with stress.
You ask how could my life possibly be so stressful,
when I explain you just say I'm too negitive.

I am so lost, hurt, and confused,
without you close by my side.
I just don't know what to do anymore,
I guess I'm gonna have to pull my mask back out.

I don't want to have to hide myself from you,
but I'll do anything to prevent losing you.
I'm going crazy not talking to you as much as before,
so this mask is my new plan of action.



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  • JinSays gold member
    April 23, 2008

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    Write it down. Write it down just like this. What a beautiful sweet poem. To be young again! Ahh! I understand. I had a boyfriend like that when I was 16.
    We were engaged 11 whole days! Ring and all!
    I hope things are better now, between you and he.
    I know how much you love him, and I truly hope things will go you want them to. I think it'll be good for you.
    You'll be a great mom, I know that.
    Blessings,
    Jin


  • Kelli Marie
    April 9, 2008

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    This is really a good poem. I like the imagery throughout. I talk to the Lord and read His word. Without Him I couldn't make it through a single day.
    Kelli


  • endless-lover silver member
    April 9, 2008
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    lol well it is nice to know things worked out and you are happy once again! great poem though


  • ChrissyJean
    March 8, 2008
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    Just thought I'd let you know that we're back together