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Change.

These Revolving doors of Sophomore year.
Must not push nor pull, but turn, turn,
Turn into something else.
Under pressure.
Under surveillance.

Under a rock.

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For "25 words, one single thought" contest :].

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  • Mr Binky
    March 8, 2008
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    Clever

    Lol. Thats awesome. I love the last line.


  • Dalaney gold member
    January 25, 2008
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    there are only 24 words!!!!lol add one quick and this is great, by the way love, lane

    • oh abstractions
      January 25, 2008
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      oh, the beauty of contractions! :] one word added, and thank you so much!