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MoonlitTowers

Stolen kisses
Under moonlit towers
Showered in dreams and false pretenses
Striving for lost beauty;
Stolen kisses
During midnight hours
You are my love
And I am your mistake.

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  • paullallady silver member
    January 26, 2008

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    wow. This was beautiful and sweet and
    tender and then that last line hits you
    and leaves you questioning and rethinking
    the previous words. great job on this one
    and it really touched me.