Stars above my head,
my eyes escape into you.
"Take me away.
Steal me tonight."
Losing myself.
Can't
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c
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t
r
a
t
e.
Drifting,
drifting.
My loins floating,
knuckles turn white.
My touch is heightened,
a smirk.
A wink.
Steal me.
I've lost me in you.
Shock treament.
H
y
p
n
o
t
i
z
i
n
g.
Lips dance.
Fingers search, Sherlock.
Perfect whisper persuasion.
You're perfect.
PERFECT.
Screaming.
Tasting.
Teasing.
Pleasing.
I wish for this.
You. So perfect.
In my dreams,
my thoughts,
w
i
s
h
e
s.
Flicking back and forth.
Eyes can't keep track
behind closed lids.
I wish for you.
Tonight.
My spine begs for you.
My mind aches for you.
I need you to grant me.
Author notes
Sometimes songs have such an impact on my writing.
This is dedicated to my boyfriend, my life, my air, my love.
A contest entry
- Wish On A Falling Star!!! by azlyn.
799 points, ended February 3, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I'm slad you have come to feel this way about someone. It can only get better, even though it might be hard to believe. Poets never stay in one place. The spirit of a thing always invites deeper spirit to attend. The spirit of a word is in its quiet cries.
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wow
this is beautiful...a wonderful dedication of love...makes me tingle inside..all good things..love and all the wondrous things it brings..thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest..
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My darling...this is brillient...and I feel every word so deep inside my heart. Lay your head on my shoulder and together we shall wish on the stars...and only believe. Thank you so much for the entry...best of luck. I love you Honey!!!
Mom
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